tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8716683130725182207.post4275663253950650117..comments2024-03-28T07:39:24.063-06:00Comments on SeeSaraWrite: WHO ARE YOU?Sara Raaschhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01196505323463444186noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8716683130725182207.post-11417863876733827762011-08-14T16:15:34.423-06:002011-08-14T16:15:34.423-06:00I have this exact same problem. (Well, I didn'...I have this exact same problem. (Well, I didn't put it in a neat list like you, so I couldn't define it in the same way, but regardless, it is very much alike)<br /><br />Maybe the key is to put in smaller distressing events in which there are small changes in the delightful persona, but not big enough to cause nausea. Sort of like having small turns at the beginning of the roller coaster (of doom or not) to let the passengers get used to the idea of the carts not moving in a straight line.Jake Heneganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05031767958230378191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8716683130725182207.post-21391148996701307702011-08-12T13:12:12.759-06:002011-08-12T13:12:12.759-06:00When you find the answer, tell me. I have major is...When you find the answer, tell me. I have major issues with this too. Maybe because I never really followed the pattern and they just kind of go all over the place...Darahttp://inthewritemind.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8716683130725182207.post-41503091952246965212011-08-12T07:18:58.101-06:002011-08-12T07:18:58.101-06:00This is my weakness, too! I think it's more ab...This is my weakness, too! I think it's more about refining, though. In the two books of yours I've read, your characters are definitely developing! It might just be a matter of going back and fine-tuning?Jill Hathawayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08388097108986318219noreply@blogger.com